So, is it good; answer plaz.....?

Hi there! Your article is good, you’re a good story teller, you just need to check your spelling. It’s good to know that at such a young age you already know how to manage to write such a good story; you can actually polish that talent to its utmost potential. I know some people like you that you use their ability to write to grow more and at the same time to earn money, by way of blogging. If you have some time, I strongly suggest learning it and working your way on it, it can help you reach your extreme potential.